Additional feedback
- I believe it could better if you make it bigger.
- Add more coloured lines like rainbow
- Making some effects of changing colour on background
Reflection
When I think about the concept of time, I planned to express the change of sky as time passes and figure of flowers that bloom and wither as the season passes. Then I chose to use the colours of sky to create a clock because I guessed the season was too extensive to compress as a clock, so I used various coloured lines in my work to show the various figures of sky. I was worried that looked too simple and plain, but I was relieved that peers commented the concept and the colours. After this project, I will add some effects on the background like changing colours and I expected that could be helpful to show the concept clearly.